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Shadows and words part 2 by ~Fjollemis:iconFjollemis:





Shadows and words (part 2)

Look into my eyes, so blue

Give me part of life, would you?

And dance among snow, that fall

Look to the sky, and notice

You’re nothing at all

Catch the wind, on your tongue

Spread the leaves

It feels so wrong

Stare into the candlelight

It just feels so right

Wait till it’s dark

Sit and watch, it snows

Beautiful how it glows

And truly break the night

Love for the one

You love, shall bring the light



Dennis
©2005-2009 ~Fjollemis
:iconfjollemis:

Author's Comments

This is the best poem I've ever written :) hehe well it worked for Leo with his painting of Mona so I wonder if it'll work for me too with this.

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~faints~

this is absolutely beautiful work dennis, indeed, you rright....this is the best poem you have ever written....im very proud for you...and of you at that.......keep it up! amazing work~

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:heart: :blackrose: ....Your tears don't fall, they crash around me
Her conscious calls, the guilty to come home
Your tears don't fall, they crash around me
Her conscious calls, the guilty to come home
... :heart: :blackrose:
:iconfjollemis:
thanks a lot :D hehe

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Be a child forever more...
:iconrynn19:
:clap: absolutly brilliant work Dennis!
:iconfjollemis:
Thank you so much Wendy :D

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Be a child forever more...
:iconcrushed-hearts:
Very beautiful!

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A little sincerity is a dangerous thing, and a great deal of it is absolutely fatal.
-Oscar Wilde
:iconfjollemis:
Thank you!

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Be a child forever more...

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