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Your Flaming Ocean Wall by ~Fjollemis:iconFjollemis:





Flames blushing so strong

Whispers of wrong

Tears as roses on the cheek

Feeling strong though weak

My heart beating for your breath

I only in your arms find my rest

Covering your moonlight face

Beating the drum following the pace

Love, love such a word

Burning off the flesh

The eyes the thirst

But in water we drown

Oceans for your eyes

Smile be wise

And songs for the mood

Counting to eight

Those flowers, faith

Hovering on your skin

As the fingers on the wind

As the feet on the ground

As the ears following

One single sound

And blushing flames

Tones that die

It is the moment

The past

The lie

The tears as your flame

Your ocean wall  

A sigh

The poem fall.

Dennis
©2005-2009 ~Fjollemis
:iconfjollemis:

Author's Comments

The wall that burns between two people, in love? Makes you sweat makes you swim, makes you wet? err sheesh I didn't say that, well read it if you like, here it is all you poetry fans;:;:; THE FLAMING OCEAN WALL:;::;:

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:iconnancyvandenboom:
I think the title itself is a poem already......great angle, unique perspective.
:iconfjollemis:
Thanks even though "no witch in it" :D oh and the picture is taken by shinetop just so I wont get the credit for that hehe
:iconpoulet:
great rhyme scheme in it at the start. i like the title it kind of uses a great unusual image. :thumbsup: :-)
:icondecayingwings:
I love the flow of it and just the thoughts it brings to my mind. It written very well and is a very beautiful poem. Great going ^_^

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'When life gives you lemons, make lemonade, and then throw it in the face of the person who gave you the lemons until they give you the oranges you originally asked for'

What is the meaning of life-shawna
Sex, monkeys, and the ocasianol purple monkey-
:iconultimat:
It's so beautiful. You create amazing images! Wow.

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"Human was an excellent diplomat, he could tell the truth while avoiding the subject entirely."

-Orson Scott Card
:iconultimat:
tehehe, my name is kimberlee, you can call me kim

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"Human was an excellent diplomat, he could tell the truth while avoiding the subject entirely."

-Orson Scott Card

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